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Homophobia 2 by ~GayAssSmurf69:iconGayAssSmurf69:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open




A walk down the hall,
Used to be so quiet and nice,
But now I fear it,
More then ever before,
Because as I walk,
Down these lonely halls,
I am torn apart,
As I hear these words,
Exit their mouths,
Gay, Faggot, Wierdo, Homo.
It all hurts just the same,
And as I tunr the corner,
Of the hallway,
Towards my locker,
I see it.
The big bold letters,
In bright red spray paint.
FAG is read across my locker.
I just couldn't handle that,
I broke down right then and there.
What little of my soul was left,
You just distroyed.
I have no will to live,
Especially here with you,
So I place this noose,
Around my neck,
And jump from this chair.
All you fuckers can go to hell.
©2005-2009 ~GayAssSmurf69
:icongayasssmurf69:

Author's Comments

Ok this is going to be a set with the poem Homophobia. I got the idea for this from an episode of Dawson's Creek. I hope you like this as much as the first of this set. :D

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~JustAnEmptySoul Aug 31, 2005, 5:31:10 AM
awww...it's so sad. i can feel the emotion, the hatred. but i dont agree with the person giving up....although it does add somethign to the piece...i dont agree with it. but very good poem none the less

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~*Dana*~

Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"
:iconashums:
~Ashums Aug 31, 2005, 5:46:52 AM
Man, I didn't ever get it that bad, but I have gotten words and stares thrown at me. I can really feel for this guy.
It is rather depressing that he decided to give up on his life. But thats how life works sometimes.

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the droning ominous voice still now pierces me through
one day no doubt, no doubt, no doubt it will play in my heart
and leave its deep mark.
-just laugh and jab at me till I fall apart.-

Hurry up! Hurry up! Wrist-Cut show
:icongayasssmurf69:
~GayAssSmurf69 Aug 31, 2005, 5:51:19 AM
Yeah I guess He is a lot different then the other guy in the other poem :P

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Kevi :heart:'s U ALL

:horny: ;) =) :evileye: :bleh::O_o: <---- smilie rainbow :D :pride:

Homophobia -----> [link]
Homophobia 2---> [link]
:icongayasssmurf69:
~GayAssSmurf69 Aug 31, 2005, 5:53:12 AM
hmmm now I am thinking about changing it maybe the ending is not that great. hmmm I think I might edit this :P

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Kevi :heart:'s U ALL

:horny: ;) =) :evileye: :bleh::O_o: <---- smilie rainbow :D :pride:

Homophobia -----> [link]
Homophobia 2---> [link]
:icongayasssmurf69:
~GayAssSmurf69 Aug 31, 2005, 5:55:24 AM
I might change the ending to this one though or maybe just rewrite it from someone else's point of view. I guess the giving up wasn't loved by many :-\

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Kevi :heart:'s U ALL

:horny: ;) =) :evileye: :bleh::O_o: <---- smilie rainbow :D :pride:

Homophobia -----> [link]
Homophobia 2---> [link]
:iconsnailshome:
~SnailsHome Aug 31, 2005, 7:39:34 AM
I like the end. It doesn't matter what other people like, Just because it's somewhat possible...
(or truthful) Keep it like it is. x__x Don't replace it with a perfect little end.
:icongayasssmurf69:
~GayAssSmurf69 Aug 31, 2005, 8:04:35 AM
You know what Kat. You are right. I love this ending, and this is the ending it should have. It shows how much words and actions can destry someones life. I respect these peoples point of views but mine says that this is quite possible and things like this have happened and people give up on life and it's just the way it is. Thanks for being the only one to fav it so far. :hug:

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Kevi :heart:'s U ALL

:horny: ;) =) :evileye: :bleh::O_o: <---- smilie rainbow :D :pride:

Homophobia -----> [link]
Homophobia 2---> [link]
:iconjustanemptysoul:
~JustAnEmptySoul Aug 31, 2005, 10:48:49 AM
yeah, i mean...it gives the impression that that's the way how to deal with it...and it isn't...you gotta face it and stand strong. i dont know, that's my view on it. so yeah... it is your poem. write it how you want...but yeah...lol. ok. :P

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~*Dana*~

Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"
:icongayasssmurf69:
~GayAssSmurf69 Aug 31, 2005, 11:59:12 AM
Yeah I Hear What You Are Saying And Personally If I Was In This Situation I Would Not Do What He Did. I Write Things That Make People Think. This Kid And His Suicide Made You Think. If You Think About It, The Poem Made You Think What You Would Do, If You Would Take The Same Path Or Choose Another. I Realise You Don't Like The Ending But I Did My Job :D ;p :P

--
Kevi :heart:'s U ALL

:horny: ;) =) :evileye: :bleh::O_o: <---- smilie rainbow :D :pride:

Homophobia -----> [link]
Homophobia 2---> [link]
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